Wednesday, May 30, 2012
Journey's End
Motivation Monday
The Prompt: You'll find monsters where you least expect them.
The photo is one I chose to go with the story.
Rules: 1. The story must start from the prompt. This means the prompt must be the first words in the story.
2. No more than 500 words (not including the prompt). No less than 100 words.
The Journey Part 5: Journey's End
Part 1 | Part 2 | Part 3 | Part 4
You'll find monsters where you least expect them.
Jessa scrambled through the gate of the Colony with rubbery knees and trembling hands. The Keeper smashed the gate in the face of the Ravager, slamming the bar home. Jessa staggered, and the guard supported her with an arm around her waist, half-carrying her to a nearby stone bench.
"Sit for a mo," he said, "and I'll send for your Captain. Horse, right?"
Jessa nodded, still panting from her frantic final race. "Water," she gasped.
"Of course," said the Keeper, and handed her his canteen.
After gulping her fill, Jessa sat, zoned out. Far better not to think at all than to remember. She'd need to recount her journey soon enough.
"Well, and ye made it, then."
Jessa leaped up at the harsh voice, her hand flying up to her forehead in a salute. "Sir, yes sir." But her knees liquefied and she dropped back to the bench. Appalled, she struggled back to her feet. "Sorry, sir."
Horse exposed huge teeth in his long, lugubrious face, his version of a smile. "Here, lass, let me take the pack." He hefted it off her shoulders and began walking toward the barracks, certain that she'd follow. "Ye found the alloy, then?"
"Yes, sir."
"And Jazzy?" His furry brow lifted.
Jessa blinked back the sting in her eyes and swallowed the desert in her throat. "She didn't make it, sir. Ravagers."
Horse shook his head, his coarse mane of dark hair flowing around his shoulders. "Ah, such a shame. But ye've done well, lass."
Seated in his office, Jessa finished her report. "Cap'n, I found a leaf, at least I think it was."
When she described it, Horse said, "Well, lass, I think ye'd better report this to the Leader."
Jessa's heart leaped and sang for joy as she followed Horse to the Sanctum, where only a favored few entered. She said a quick prayer to the None that the Leader would find favor with her.
The Leader's eyes were deep and mesmerizing, and she dared not look into them as he ushered her into his Holy Place. Seated on a cushion before his throne she kept her head bowed, eyes down as she told him of the leaf.
"And were there no fragments you could collect and bring to me?" His sonorous voice echoed like angel choirs.
"The Ravager almost got me while I was looking for them."
The Leader rose and held out his hand, drawing her up. "Look at me, child."
When her eyes met his, Jessa froze, and when his lips covered hers she would have screamed, but she couldn't. Her thoughts, memories, dreams all flowed from her mouth into his and were absorbed into his being.
His jaw unhinged, swallowing first her face, then her head. The rest of her followed, and she knew no more.
Prompt plus 468 words
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